I’d like to make
Her
cum
in a poem
let it drop
like a bomb
through her clothes
to stain
the fancy seat
she’s
sittin on,
rocking the horses
her fingers are dancing on
andante of moans,
stiff dicks brush
her ears
teeth tearing at stiff nipples
crescendo of words
lifting her searing cunt
off the soft chair
her fingers flying
like the strains of a mad violin,
all that’s left is the pulse
of a maddening roar
a wild rush of color,
and the sudden need for me.
Probably be a personal thing
like the taste of fingers,
or a wet beard that she adores;
sometimes I wonder
if a poem should do that,
eat tulips I mean.
In a list
A contest entry
- buk & thee by onerios13.
1300 points, ended August 11, 2008, 14 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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lol yes i enjoyed this much. ur a fine writer
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Dropping a bomb is such a classy way of putting it. Even better on a fancy seat.
Desiree
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Congrats to you. A rare shiny for the Lute.
Lisa
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Oh yes, SO buk. Congrats
!
Sailor Ptolema.
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This raises an interestig question. Is pornography without anal really pornography?
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ahhh yes. I see why this won. Excellent.
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damn....
lol...love it
i dont have balls enough to write poems like this...
mal
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This had everything I want from buk...from the overt sexual tones, to the gritty imagery and an ending as soft as goosedown.
Yeah. This is the one.
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VERY BUKY!!!!!
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This is fantastic. I especially love the last stanza with the reference to eating tulips....bravo!
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christ, another misplaced apostrophe - you people!
(These things tangle me up and keep me from the essence of the poem.)
Buk was not a very nice person, actually very nasty, from what I've seen of him in films. I watched something with him kicking and cursing and pretty much spazzing out on his wife. Ugly. Also watched him drink 3 bottles of red wine during a 2-hour reading in Vancouver (on film, not in person.)
Someone else today said cum in a poem. Here we spell it "come." Apparently.
I like this, but I'd prefer a less leading title.
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without the nasty people who you'd gossip about
maybe if you weren't watching so many films you'd concentrate on what you're reading more
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Filthy perhaps lol dirty definitely not and honest? Well just like a tulip only grows infrequently, you let it out now and then and I have to chuckle, you are human after all
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just because you can make me cum
it doesn't make you jesus...
filth-
(i like it)
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the only thing filthy about this.. is that passion is considered filthy...
when I think of Bukowski, what comes to mind for the most part is that..he had passion, not just for sex.. but a passion for life
and while his work might read filthy for some, for me it reads like love, but then as I always say ..I'm backwards.
I love his writing for that, whether I agree with his expression or not, he had the balls to express an element of what it means/takes to be.. a poet..
and so does this.
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Disgustin
and that ain't sayin all it is
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damn
sighs
filth!!! utterly... you cad sir, yes!!
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I find this driven by innocence -- and filthy become Holy. Buk's poems have the tendency to make me think that way too.
not a Buk afficiando by any means -- but there is something very innocent about his bravado.
Back for another read.
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bukowski "inspired" poems are classified as filthy
or rude or whatever
to me they sound (bukowski's) as a raw mixture of blunt innocent sexuality
like a child rubbing his penis because it feels good
not dirty
sure I might be wrong
but they're certain not "filthy"
guess everybody writes their perception
and it's not scary but... too little
and that is disappointing enough
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utterly filthy.
(which of course means i like it).
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filthy
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