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Blissful longing




outside window pane
wind whispered your name in my ear
heart ached for untamed desires.






















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  • Samcat
    August 13, 2008

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    I like the depth of your poem. I have to say the line "heart ached for untamed desires" is my favourite.
    Thank you for entering & good luck!
    Sammi
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