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No Shelter In This Storm

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Sparrows harvesting sky clotted with micro bits
of bully-bugs zigzagging
on  unseen airstreams with battling wings

beak-open and bent on bringing
feisty feast to yawning yellow mouths
nestled in the wind whipped branches
safe from these damned angry exiles
she swoops

a feather and a wing of longing are all that is left
in gray harbor of press-down sky
in this land of strangeness in new nesting
that leaves me in mouth-wide longing

I swat at another victim looking at me
as if I were shelter from a slide of storm








Author notes

new writing

jpg = a sparrow feeding her adopted cowbird twice her size

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  • creationsfromheart
    August 5, 2008
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    Beautiful write with wonderful imagery good luck in the contest.


  • echo-ink
    August 5, 2008
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    I loved this. thanks for entering it. *rose* PL


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    August 5, 2008
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    excellent imagery and beautifully written piece

    God bless...