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"The Simple Girl"

Catch the innocense of those eyes
Like a frosty heart does sighs
Shimmering glitter, shadowy scrolls
Last ray of the night dies

Tears so often enhance that face
Thatr they lost their past grace
But oh why? there grief's much
The heart so soft has lost the race

Lively giggles though they're fake
But yet this is must for friend's sake
Sometimes the controlled soul explodes
And the sleeping emotions wake

Still she lives, the girl of thought
Her way through the shadows fought
And still she falls by hitting the wall
Even though often she's been taught

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  • kamranAslam
    August 13, 2008

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    great dear

    nice dear.its a great start here at this site from u.keep on writing and sharing these precious pearls.great writing./