Many is the time
I have spoken with you, being with you
Each time I have come away
With the feeling that I left a part of me behind.
Those graceful qualities I see in you
The selflessness you display in your love for the forlorn
The inner beauty that radiates from you
All these fill me with a sense of completion when I am with you.
Darling, how I love you so!
How I long never again to come away from you
To be with you for all time, yes, for all eternity
Loving you, caring for you, mending that that heart broken by a fool.
Here and now, my love
I lay my aching heart down at your feet
Begging you, to salve this longing
Help me take the pain away, make me your Lancelot.
Marry me, my love
Marry me and make me whole
Marry me and make me the man that I yearn to be
Marry me, let me be all for you, friend, lover, husband.
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Position 1
A contest entry
- Ok..Bored and lonely.. (Guys only) by Angelflower.
490 points, ended August 17, 2008, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
We attract hearts by the qualities we display: we retain them by the qualities we possess. --Suard
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Oh wow.. This was really really intense..And also so romantic!!! you have made this contest so hard to judge!!! lol. I'm really shocked by how well you did with the prompt!!! oh this is going to be so hard!! thank you truly for writing this!! best of luck in the contest!!
Angel
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