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Life's Art

The garden of a child so sweet,
Where innocence is not lost.
The world to her is a fantasy,
Till the adult hood line is crossed.

Her life right now is clean and pure,
Bubbles float and pop all day.
Fairies float over flowers of gold,
With dragons you do not slay.

Leaving footprints in the sand of time,
That are stamped in someone’s heart.
Forever she will be small and pure,
On the canvas of life’s true art.

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    October 8, 2008
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    EXCELLENT

    This should have been a gold for it speaks of all and what we truly could be and feel all our life


  • storiesuntold gold member
    August 27, 2008

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    Excellent write here

    This is penned straight from a mothers heart for within the flight and pureness of all children so is the light within which shines for all to see .


  • z etoile
    August 24, 2008

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    Beautiful poem about childhood I see this in my children so precious is the time when they are just little.

    • goalsv
      August 24, 2008
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      Thank you, when they are little they are so truthful and innocent. You just have to love them.


  • stavykm gold member
    August 19, 2008

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    Loved It

    This is such a cute poem for the picture. I just loved it and the true innocense of the precious child. Thank you for your entry and best of luck in the contest.
    Many Blessings
    Kelle Marie


  • 2lullabyhaven
    August 15, 2008

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    Youth, so refined, so blessed with innocence; I love what you have did with this prompt...a little thing, however, in your second line-did you mean to say where instead of were?
    Good luck in the contest lol


  • Rose Angel gold member
    August 12, 2008

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    Though I have not seen the picture, you do a wonderful portrayal of this young little girl. I adore this poem as I see every child, every little girl in this poem who deserves a life, love and a destiny. A beautiful write!

    • goalsv
      August 13, 2008
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      Thanks again, just hoping we can all see again just a little of life as it was when we were little.


  • Frogzter gold member
    August 5, 2008
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    Beautiful my friend! What else can be said?

    Frogz~


  • Diamond Butterfly
    August 5, 2008

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    This is fantastic, a really good interpretation of the picture.

    I really enjoyed reading, thanks.

    DB x

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