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He Follows

A mere whisper
In your shadow
He follows
Where you dare
Not lead



A contest entry

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  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    August 6, 2008

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    Nice job. I think that the poem fits the picture prompt very well. Congratulations on the HM. You deserved it.

    Mike


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    August 6, 2008

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    I looked at the picture, and I think this is a stunning take on it! Speaks to me of a child who follows into things that he shouldn't... I found this really powerful!


  • pinkhawk
    August 6, 2008
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    ...few words but it really tickles my back and ears!...nice!


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    August 6, 2008

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    Where you dare not lead ... powerfully penned! So much said in just a few words

    ♥
    Thank you & Best of luck!
    Stay safe
    ~Manda