I may not know you,
But I would love to!
I heard it's your birthday!
So I hope it's not dull & grey.
I came to buy you a lovely present,
But all my money was spent.
I was going to buy you a waistcoat,
So instead I'm writing a little note.
Oh I must say you look like Tom Hanks!
I got that off my chest now, thanks!
Anyway I wish you a Happy Birthday Jeff!
I hope the birthday cake was made by a top chef!
Have a wonderful time on your special day,
Lots of fun, laughter & play.
Sorry I couldn't buy the waistcoat!
Have fun and act the goat!
Happy Birthday CricketJeff!
Copyright Karlie67 August 2008
Author notes
Happy Birthday Cricketjeff!
A contest entry
- Happy Birthday To Cricketjeff by ecrivain01.
1250 points, ended August 13, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Good write here
Yes a birthday card so special indeed and I must say he does look like Tom Hanks
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Great fun and a total delight to read
Thank you deeply
I read all the entries as they came in but didn't comment so as not to influence the judge, then forgot to come back, so now doing so.
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Cute ...
I imagine he will be happy with this.
Thanks for entering.
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