What is this emotion?
It can't be love, but just as though it feels,
my heart floats light from the sound of her voice.
I don't know what i'm feeling,
but this feeling is strong.
No, not lust, but something more,
but it can't be love... just can't be love.
I don't even know you, but I feel it so well,
my heart is still beating with this passion,
what is it?
No, it cannot be,
it must not be,
but... it is.
It is love, it has to be,
God smite me if i'm wrong,
there is no other like it,
these feelings are too strong.
I know not how this happened,
I don't know where to go,
she has my heart now,
like a river passion flows.
So now I ask you,
if you feel the same,
will you take my hand,
will you take my name?
Author notes
I don't know what's happening, I don't know how it happened, but it did... shit...
A contest entry
- •○•♥Tell Me How True Love Is♥•○• by XxX-Ivy-Love-XxX.
750 points, ended August 5, 2008, 36 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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wow!
this is a strong and very powerful write! your emotions ran deep! it was an intense write and love is pretty complicated! >.< keep penning!
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very nice work. good luck!
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Good write. The imagery you used were really I good. I enjoyed reading this piece. It was concise, but you got your message accross. I wished you would have played on the battle going on in your mind whether the feeling you were feeling was love or not. That would have added some more depth, but good write man.
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