Should the moon and stars be mine to give,
I would lay them at your door,
Gold and silver butterflies a platinum sheaf of wheat,
I will lay with rose petals on your floor,
worship at your feet.
All of these things and more my love,
I will dedicate to you,
If the Lord would also sanction it,
I would even die for you!
My heart my soul my burning desire,
You are the one for me set my heart on fire,
Without your love life would be just dire,
How did I live before you came along?
Endorphines released so happy I feel
Slap myself three times a day in case it's not real.
Felt I could fly with no need of a plane,
When you told me that day, that you felt the same.
All of my life, now every breath that I take
Is filled with your feelings, every desicion I make.
If you left I would waste;
Die with heartache.
And yet I would do it if you asked for your sake.
You are the only thing I live for now.
A contest entry
- simple contest by Avendesora Dreamer.
700 points, ended September 1, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I like this, and I don't like this...I like the message, the feeling behind it....but I don't particularly like the style, its just a bit too chopy for my taste...and yet, the language! its fantastic! I'm of two minds about how I feel about this, but I am very glad you entered it in so i could read it. Thank you!
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I always try to confuse and bemuse I feel it makes people read rather than skim.
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Excellent!
You do very well Sir in your expression, the words are indeed complete. I am awed with your art. Bravo, and best wishes.
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