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the Line

I’ve almost crossed the line
from coveting to wanting.
It’s one thing to envy
quite another to crave.

It feasts on me like jealousy, self-esteem and doubt

It’s one thing to wish
quite another to touch.
Resentment becomes passion
I’ve almost crossed the line

Author notes

I found this the other day (written about 10 years ago) and tweaked it a little. Thought I would tiptoe back in the water here.

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  • PoesyPeruser
    September 18, 2008
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    ooh, so true ~ nice use of emotions.
    Poesy


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    August 5, 2008

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    and what a beautiful splash it did make...it flows like song and leaves its beat in the head...sighs...i have missed your beautiful poems thank you so much for sharing with me


    • heygoo
      August 5, 2008
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      Thank you for all of your encouragement and thank you for missing me. I've missed you as well. Just not much time to be online, busy living I guess