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I love you too

If I whisper your name
in a thunder storm,
I know you would hear me.

.

If I touched a single tree
in a forest,
I know you would feel me.
.

If I dream of fawns and fireflies,
I know you’d be
dreaming along with me.

. 

For the purity in your heart
is pristine
and has captured my soul,
you hold me freely.
.
Faultless, spotless and perfect
is your love,
and I just want you to know God,
I love you too.













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okay, this is what I was inspired to write for you my friend, hope you enjoy

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  • poet2angels gold member
    September 18, 2008

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    So filled with beautiful language, soft sounds of love and wonderful faith!...
    TY for entering this lovely piece!

    Lynda


  • Cupcrazy gold member
    September 8, 2008

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    So beautiful hun, what a tremendous faith you have, your emotion and description are just perfection. A wonderful take on the prompt. Hugs, Bunny


  • ten thousand cicadas gold member
    September 1, 2008

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    This was so quiet and soft and absolutely beautiful. I love the intimacy and the wonderful conclusion.


  • Everwind Rising
    August 28, 2008
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    Simply beautiful.


  • Mirthryl
    August 20, 2008

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    Beautifully expressed. There is this One certainty of unimpeachable love, entirely "If-less."


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    August 12, 2008
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    Exquisite poem/prayer. Beautiful praise.


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    August 7, 2008

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    Oh my. This is such a beautiful testament and tender take on the prompt. I enjoyed reading this so much. What a beautiful feeling this left me with. ~Pamela


  • paulcreates silver member
    August 6, 2008

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    Quite sensitive and touching Dove. I like how you've used Naruda's poem to inspire you in this.

    Paul


  • sheltered
    August 6, 2008

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    I like the nature aspect
    and the line...
    "you hold me freely"
    almost seems conradictory at first
    but upon understanding...


  • queen Moderators member
    August 6, 2008

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    This is amazing, you are amazing Beautiful poem, good luck to you in the contest


  • Little Eagle Greeters member
    August 5, 2008

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    Awww Sis

    This is so very beautiful, and breathtaking. I see your muse is back in full force. I love this.

    God bless
    Tammy


  • Roaddog Wolf
    August 5, 2008
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    Very nicely penned

    and such a beautiful thing to write for God. You penned a worthy piece for his Grace, good write


  • Skybow silver member
    August 5, 2008

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    Beautiful, just beautiful

    What a wonderful love letter to God. I wish I had written it, as I read it I felt it being engraved on my heart. Thank you for writing this.

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