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Stealing Moments

breath on neck, sends my head spinning
wrapped arms and beating hearts-
let go and the world

spins around us.

straining to fill our empty hearts
with pent-up desire
...believing in nothing but your presence
just your soft kisses.
afraid of the inevitable end
bliss can't last forever:

the earth is already rushing to greet me
I'm in free fall with you, but reality
keeps getting in the way.


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ehh, I'm getting back in the swing of things after some long-term writers block.

Some constructive critisism please?

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