In your presence I tremble
With a deep glowing pleasure
The intensity of your beauty
I can never even measure
The glory of your face
Sparks within a burning flame
Melting our hearts together
Becoming one and the same
Your soul makes me warm
And quickens the ripened seed
From your tender heart
Does the sweetness proceed
Unspeakable intelligence and
Beautiful, wonderful charms
Takes my breath away
Only if I could hold you in my arms
I am ashudder by soft spoken words
And eyes of tender glory
You make me tremble inside
And cast away my worry
You light a flaming fire
With explosions of flaming love
With eternal grace and wonder
That shines down from above
Like honey to the ear
I'm embraced by sweet warm passion
Open your heart to me
Then we will only imagine
A contest entry
- So close ... yet so far by The Hardest Goodbye.
500 points, ended August 7, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Hopeless Romantics by N.W. Clerk.
1200 points, ended September 6, 2008, 39 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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this is rlly sweet and loveing i like it alot good luck :]
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oh wow, this was an amzazing poem!! I really loved it
Thanks so much for entering it in my contest. -
Oh. This is a sweet little poem that you have going on here.
It sounds like this person really makes your heart go pitter patter. Or maybe you just have a really active imagination! Lol Who can say? Either way I thought you did a good job of expressing yourself.
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I like this poem, when I started writing I only did ryhme and then started to open up to freewrite. This is an amazing poem for anyone, a new or old member. I like how the lines are about the same length. My favorite lines are "You light a flaming fire with explosions of flaming love
With eternal grace and wonder that shines down from above"... keep penning
♥always Kate
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very great. good luck!
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This poem speaks of the flame that resides in love
the flame many of us seek.
You have opened your heart on this one and your sweet warm passions echos with this poem
Thanks for entering
All the best
Ken
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