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Beautiful Flower

The scent of you,
your fragrance lingers,
dancing in swirls

around me
filling my air. 
I close my eyes
and there you are

before me,  
petals opening,
exposing your treasure within.
The luscious nectar

that is you,
so utterly intoxicating ,
so soft to touch.
Like honey to taste.
I take hold

and pull you closer.
Your warmth

it renders me helpless.
Like a drunken fool
overcome by your sensuous
and forbidden treats.
A gift you give
with such tenderness.
A delicate

and beautifuly

intricate

budding flower

that I adore.
Your offering so luscious,
so filled with passion,
with such sweet desire.
I need to feel you closer,
even closer still,
as the anticipation
is more than I can endure.
Oh flower of mine,
open up to me,

surrender to the pleasure
and feed my soul.


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  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    October 25, 2008
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    Thank you for entering, since I have commented on this before I will only say good luck.


    whisper


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    October 11, 2008

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    Very beautiful and passionate and I love this background, it is a perfect compliment. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.


    whisper


  • darlintlc silver member
    August 30, 2008

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    This is a..."I now need a smoke poem" WOW!!

    Loved it!!
    darlintlc


    • nevadapoet
      September 1, 2008
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      That good huh??? why thank you so much...I guess I did my job Huh? Thanks for the read, I appreciaate you.
      Nevadapoet


    • nevadapoet
      September 1, 2008

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      Thank you for the honerable mention in your contest...more than anything though, I appreciate the read and the review...I'm glad you were able to feel what I wrote. Again I thank you.
      Nevadapoet


      • darlintlc silver member
        September 2, 2008
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        You're very welcome! I wish I could have gave gold to everyone in my contest cause there was so many good entries! That's why I want this contest to keep going!

        Keep writing!!
        darlintlc


  • Emerald Dog
    August 17, 2008

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    Such an incredibly sexy, sensual write you have penned here - filled to the brim with cunning linguistics! I'm not sure now if I need a smoke or a drink! Great writing.


  • Riamh
    August 10, 2008

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    This poem and the background mix so well together, sensual beauty.
    I loved all of this but the last part really and honestly touched me.

    I need to feel you closer
    even closer still
    as the anticipation
    is more than I can endure
    Oh flower of mine
    open up to me

    surrender to the pleasure
    and feed my soul

    Absolutely beautiful!


  • ShaShay
    August 6, 2008

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    I like the soft feel combined with the fire of passion. You have a gift that few can attain. Keep up the good work and pen on...~Poo~


  • LionessK silver member
    August 5, 2008

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    Very sensual indeed...
    your descriptions are just beautiful. This has such a dreamy feel to it... helped along by the flow of thought. Wonderfully put together and written out.


    ~Kristy


  • OOo AnGeL oOo
    August 5, 2008
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    Beautiful

    This is a very lovely poem


  • Sandygram silver member
    August 5, 2008

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    Beautiful Poem

    You have penned a beautiful and sensual write. A delight to read. Best of luck. You take care. Sandy


  • zappa gold member
    August 5, 2008
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    It's a beautiful flower

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    August 5, 2008
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    Thank you for your sensually beautiful submittal, good luck in my contest, Josie

  • --Blue--
    August 5, 2008

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    This piece was both lovely and erotic. I liked the ebb and flow- the movement throughout was very nice. It painted a picture and invoked a range of emotions throughout. Well done.


  • stavykm gold member
    August 5, 2008

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    Excellent

    Wow this is a excellent sensual, erotic poem. Your flow and just the beauty of the imagery brings anticipation to reader to keep on reading. I was captivated. Excellent poem and again WELCOME to the site.
    Wishing You Many Blessings
    Kelle Marie
    stavykm

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