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Wedding White


    Wedding white
    bordered your
    solitude

      you had put it off
    for one more day
    and cried the sky
    melted underneath
    ruby eyes as
  you faded

      Only ever in dreams
      when vision is
      obscured by clarity
      have i found you
    with black hair
    with red hair
    with silken strands
  that i have only
ever loved in dreams.
 
      I knew you once.
    and
    and i hunt you
    in dreams.
      I knew you once.
    and
      I will find you
      again.
   

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  • movedon
    August 29, 2008
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    *locks my doors and windows* scary! Eerie....and yet really well done!

    Warmest,
    Mylee