Surprise visit
Caught off guard
Guard on duty
Smiling lips slip a kiss
Eyes lit up confused
Company policy or honey?
What the heck!
Let’s go, I’m on night shift!
Author notes
What can I say they are truly madly deeply in love.
A contest entry
- Quickie for a Quickie PIF #106 15 Poets /30 words by Roaddog Wolf.
425 points, ended August 17, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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lol love your humors implication and how you tie it into the readers interpretation which is then left open to their sense of humor good write


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you know i am all for interracial relationships, so i think i can say yes to interspecies for animals, keep it flowing and good luck in contest
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Oh dear, this is amazing! And the picture, tooooo cute! gave me a chuckle!
I love the gentle humor in this one! You did great!
Best of luck in this contest!
and love
Nyetta


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Hahaha....
Very cute my new favorite.
Many, many best wishes in this contest.





