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Freeing


I want to free myself
From self imposed tribulations
Senses provoke indulgence
Makes mind a slave,
Keep them starved
They lose vibrancy

Where they hang in balance
Neither drenching nor thirst,
Only bout of fresh air to lungs
Keep marvellous thing moving

Can I attain that intelligence?
That carries neither more nor less
But keeps me holistic


Author notes

to free one self is a continuous battle

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  • Ace13
    August 14, 2008
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    Wow

    I don't see how this has anything to do with my contsest though looks wounderful


  • whos my humblepie
    August 4, 2008

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    wonderful Venugopal!

    I love these:
    Can I attain that intelligence?
    That carries neither more nor less
    But keeps me holistic