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Love calling ...

How can one man be twice the man of another?
What does that mean?
Is he a fat fuck?
Has he been using a pump on his dick?
Twice the man...
there is a door in the side of my head
I would invite you in
but your stupid, useless, giant, limp dick,
and your flaccid muscles get stuck on the way in..
Piss off;  I’m the new man around here.
Wombs are temples where men once felt god.
I don’t understand her
but I’m a Shaman
she doesn’t understand me either.

Our love curls through forests
and cool dawn marshes
passing hear to there
in time.

Here to there,
here to there
time is like a whisper
why are we here?

Because of her...

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  • kristina85
    August 31, 2008
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    Great poem, its very blunt.

  • Dalaney gold member
    August 5, 2008

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    this is rather interesting....of the four poems I've read of yours so far, I like this one the best. It's rather quirky I'll be reading more....oh, and thank you for reading my poetry, too Love, Lane