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New Song

Do you want to hear
his song.
Learn the words so you
can sing along.

Raise your voice in
a brand new tune.
Follow him with a 
remade you.

Do you want to walk
with him.
Embrace the dawn
time and time again.

Stepping out on his
dusty path.
Accepting all that
comes to pass.

Do you listen as he says
follow me.
Do you hear,
fall down on your knees.

Feel his spirit touch
your soul.
Rise again,
know you are whole.

Trusting
in his love.




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Hope this helps. Note: reedited 8-12-08

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  • stavykm gold member
    August 17, 2008
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    This Is Beautiful

    What a beautiful song... I know Nikki will enjoy this very much and I want to thank you for your encouraging words of praise to Our God the Father in which we during difficult times find it hard to praise. She is such a strong young Christian and I'm sure she will thoroughly enjoy this. Thank you so much for your entry and best of luck in the contest.
    Many Blessings
    Much Love
    Kelle Marie


  • Talking Toni gold member
    August 5, 2008
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    This should really......

    help Nikki alot!!! WOrds of truth and encouragement...I am trying to cme up with something for this contest..she is so young ans sweet but has had her innocence shattered by violence to a loved one...This was very Lyrical David and it would have a nice ring to it with music too!!! Thanks for sharing and I know Nikki will just love it!!!~~Toni~~


  • dustookie2
    August 5, 2008

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    A very inspiring write you have presented. I wont sing dont want to scare the neighbours. Your lines flow with respect and love.... Good luck in this contest but it really goes beyond a contest.