Your sapphire eyes,
once took me to
wonderland;
rose colored
world.
Summer of sixty-two,
camp...
...the beach...
...the "beehive".
Special, popular,
making love,
on plaid cloth,
in the sand.
Then, you tore
out my soul,
nailed it to
the wall.
My heart felt
like a hockey puck,
slammed against
a light-post.
You blew me a kiss,
she smiled,
turning away,
I let the tears fall.
Author notes
Word bank: my favorite...
1. nail (nailed)
2. lightpost
3. rose
4. hockey puck
5. heart
6. special
7. wonderland
9. popular
10. saphire
11. sixty-two
12. camp
13. beach
14. beehive
15. ring
16. plaid
17. mushroom (title)
A contest entry
- Word Bank Contest by Chanson belle.
550 points, ended August 11, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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you used all the words but i don't understand how the title connects to the content of the poem......but the rest of the poem is nice, thanks for entering
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wow - this is wonderful what you've done with that word-bank!!! Tells a complete story with great images and emotions!
Excellent!
best wishes in your contest
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