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Jesus Loves Me

 
Jesus
My Savior.  He
gave up the ultimate
sacrifice for me...His life.   He
lifts me up when I am down.   He loves me
that much!   He loves you, too.   Invite
Him into your heart.   He
is your Savior.
Jesus
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

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  • Autumn Rain13
    September 25, 2008

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    Wow this poem is beautifully written, it has such a strong message which I think is important in a poem, I love it!


  • Rose Angel gold member
    September 14, 2008

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    Beautiful sis.....How simple the words, and simple the act of accepting Christ's love....Such a beauty of a background too!...


  • M0ofi3
    August 14, 2008

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    Great Write!

    A biblically accurate testimony of the Lord.

    My only critique would be in the word usage.

    You wrote:

    "He
    gave up the ultimate
    sacrifice for me...His life."

    Shouldn't it be:

    He
    gave the ultimate
    sacrifice for me...His life.(?)

    I know it throws off the form you're writing, but if He "gave up" sacrifice, that's not sacrificing at all-a double negative of sorts.

    Thanks...


  • Samplette gold member
    August 14, 2008

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    A veyy nicely written richtameter. Love your background as well. You've done a lovely job lifting up our Lord. Thank you for sharing.
    Sam


  • Frogzter gold member
    August 13, 2008

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    Amen! I love this form and you have done the Lord justice with it! A blessing to my eyes when I read it.

    Frogz~


  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    August 12, 2008
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    Beautiful and form.


  • The Azure Flame
    August 5, 2008
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    Short, Heartfelt, and deep. Beautiful poem. God bless and keep writing.


  • Haiku-bless-you gold member
    August 5, 2008

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    Beautiful words of faith and Life! A wonderful Savior indeed. Your poem is inspiring and uplifting. Thanks for sharing your Faith and your Savior in this poem. To God be the glory!

    Dennis

  • goalsv
    August 4, 2008

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    A great rictameter and even greater message. My Savior and yours. How awesome. See you in Heaven!


  • thelordreigns gold member
    August 4, 2008

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    Wonderful rictameter!

    What would we do without His love?

    - joanne -

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