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While He's Away From Home...

While he's away from home,
His girlfriend is all home alone,
I'm thinking about jumping bed and he's getting shot in the head,
Thats horrible I know, but me and you are making angels in the snow,
We got glow sticks at night so when were doing it we glow,
He's a marine and I'm just a civilian kissing her in the rain,
When he comes back he'll hearing the Bells from Norte Dame,
Cuz I'm taking away all her pain,
It's funny cuz I don't even know her name,
Cuz I got so much game,
And that guy in Iraq is so lame,
Sorry dude I got her, were snuggling watching jarhead,
Classic kiss on lips grabbing her hips,
Then thats it we romance and dance of sex all night long,
Till the early morning when the birds are chirping,
And Im smoking a cigarette after the love of my life

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  • Beyond Broken
    August 5, 2008

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    haha. this made me giggle. thanks for entering my contest. it was a fun poem and actually jarhead is one of my favorite movies. thanks again for entering =]