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Heart

A gentle thrum moves though
My head against your chest
Somehow becoming part of you
The genital rhythm lulling me
Into a great and gernorous
Sense of security

And soon I can feel my heart beat along
Fighting to escape its bonds
And combine itself with your heavenly song
It's all i have ever wanted
For our two hearts to be one
Because to me our love is to be flaunted
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  • MusicIsMyLifeline
    August 7, 2008
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    haha ya, other than the spelling mistakes, very good


  • mickey94
    August 5, 2008
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    the spell check wasnt working


  • meggie94x
    August 4, 2008
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    okay sp issues: gentle not gential.... and security not sicurity.... but yea other wise very good