My tongue touches her skin
Not my lips, only my tongue for now
I begin with her neck and slowly work my way down
The heat from her body punches me in the face
The room on fire and i'm only to her breast
Her back arches she try’s to hold her urges in
I’m playing with her belly button now
My heart pumping fiercely in my chest
There’s no denying it, i’m hard
And i’m just as ready as she is
I squeeze my cock
Rubbing it around her pussy lips
Oh so gently
Her breathing deepens
As I tease her some more
Finally she breaks
She clings to my body and now penetration begins
She jumps on top to control the depth
And i’m at her whim
She screams towards the heavens
I bite my lip and stare into her fiery eyes
Everything is there
My love, hate, passion, pain, and care lay on top of me
And we both explode with excitement
We lay in the devastation
Holding one another
I kiss her soft neck
Her breathing calms
The fire remains
A contest entry
- Summer Sizzler...Men Only by Dalaney.
1300 points, ended August 14, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I really like 'I bit my lip
and stare into her fiery eyes', although, i think it should be bite in this present tense poem, I also love
the line 'We lay in devastation.'
The rest, I don't care for as much
thanks so much for entering one of the most explicit poems in the contest..lolol
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