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Sapphire Truth

Diffused smoky sapphire light in hazy hues
Shimmering from a lightpost in shade of blues
There upon a mushroom of pinkish rose
A sparkling ring of fairies in full repose

Glinting sands upon a whitened beach
A wonderland so special and hard to reach
Where hearts are drawn into the shifting dunes
And fates are tried with fall of crystal runes.

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Pink Duckling
Words used:- lightpost, rose, heart, special, wonderland, sapphire, beach, ring, mushroom.

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  • Ellis gold member
    September 17, 2008
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    This took me right back to my childhood

    Delightful. So well written. I couldn't begin to write something like this, and I'd like to!


  • Chanson belle
    August 5, 2008
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    pretty, paints a nice picture thanks for entering (: