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TO u, FROM me

Tears are welling like tides
Never of joy; they seep from my eyes

Telling stories of love, hurt and hate
Feelings I'm sure that many can relate

TO

My body is tired, my heart is weak
We seem to have an argument every time we speak

A rewound tape, the same scene on repeat
We fight and fuck and fight again; I'm exhausted with defeat

I'm trapped in a nightmare, though I'm awake
Not sure of how much more of this I can take

FROM

You. An angelic demon of passion and mistrust
Brainwashing me to be an instrument of devotion and lust

When I come home to you I am filled with misery
I know we'll fight; indefinitely

You find something wrong and scream and shout
Not too much more of this; I'm almost out...

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  • Age of Rain
    October 28, 2008
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  • xxprophet gold member
    August 14, 2008

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    In-Fucking-Credible excuse my language

    In-Fucking-credible!!! This was just....I am speechless. The raw passion, I felt you here on this lady. In-Fucking-credible!!...I truly have no other words. I felt your soul speaking on paper - WOW! Back @ Ja Lady