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life's wisdom

down the road life can be as sour as limes
of the day, hour, or moment you never know who goes next
what do you want with power?
live life to the fullest each day and enjoy each moment
tick-tock, what's this all about? not enough time
what can you say to a world that hurts and turn its back on its own people
a million dreams shattered
many wives beaten by their husbands and battered
looking for hope and love
from another source
life is a compass
you see the direction
but you never know the set cource
the only thing that keeps you going is God and the will to survive
how far will you go?
and just who or what is your drive?
many things in life and nature that can't be explained by facts and science
looking for a friend
someone you could confide and hide in
many of us don't like to hear it but that's the truth
live good and good will reward you tenfold
mock life and life will mock you

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  • etoile
    August 18, 2008
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    this was nice
    i liked the last line


  • aanika
    August 12, 2008

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    I'm a little confused about the "Merry Christmas" background in relation to this poem
    but I like the piece itself