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If

If three husbands
three best men
and three bridesmaids
doesn't suit you,
then you're probably
looking for something
that's not out yet.

If, you can't escape
your children,
and your pet's a pest.
All while having
in-law problems,
then frankly, you seem
due for a make-shift vacation.

Make the shift now,
worry about it all later.
Take the leap, do it now;
everything will catch up,
don't worry, all will be well.
Just do what you do best
leaving skid marks on their vests.

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  • malmadre gold member
    August 16, 2008
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    They always have ways to track you down..


  • individuality gold member
    August 7, 2008

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    a good piece of poetry, i never worry about life lol i just whione about it constantly and kick the walls of my brain.


    • 2lullabyhaven
      August 7, 2008
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      I am afraid to do that one hahaha my brain may not 'sustain' the damage so well hahhaa lol


  • PinkPony
    August 5, 2008

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    HEHE... At first I thought you might be writing about having three husbands and that's kinda cool if they're all jewelers. lol


  • Melodies
    August 5, 2008

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    You are RIGHT ON about this mindset for a vacation. What a smart lady you are, Pat. Love your advice and how well you wrote it. Thank you for coming to our group contest!


    • 2lullabyhaven
      August 5, 2008
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      This one was really off the cuff hahaha but it may be okay, I hope anyways lol and thanks


  • crimsondew
    August 5, 2008
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    Everyone needs a break....well written...
    All the best!


    • 2lullabyhaven
      August 5, 2008

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      So true, so very true, I am way overdue; and I just got back from one hahhaaha Thanks

      • crimsondew
        August 5, 2008
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        Glad you got one break...Its a start!!!Keep 'em coming

  • Zannah
    August 4, 2008
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    I like this. Good luck in the contest!

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