Oh, how you're wrapped in my head.
A kin to the high volt of infra-red.
Chained to my in-depthness, you are,
while taking complete, total occupancy,
garnering all my in and outgoing frills.
Lonesome, so lonesome without you;
this reeks through all my attitudes.
Won't you kindly acknowlege my needs.
As you are really the only one who can.
I'm simply yours in sensational ways.
To want you anymore would spell death.
To want you anyless would zap my breath.
I just want you like no other possible.
Arrangements are prepared; just say yes.
I know I'm asking for the world, perhaps.
But that's how much I pine for you, dear.
My every breath vaporizes into your sphere.
Have you never noticed my frequent whispers?
How I hang on your coat-tail's flared end?
My feelings are outed; I stand here hoping.
Author notes
Oh my love ! my desires are like the fishes without water caged in your thoughts, wandering here and there to find a drop of the water of your love....Unknown
A contest entry
- desires... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended August 5, 2008, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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a good piece of poetry which flows along with a smooth rhythm and stylish rhyme, a golden smile that tracks loneliness.
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Thanks, Ianlol
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Humm..quite a curious awaiting..and quite natural ones..I love it...well done..and my thanks for sharing it...
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