My blood stained scraped knees
from hard times of street b-ball
can't even touch the icy covered black hole
in which I call a heart.
It's not that I want to be alone
or that I'm lonely
I'm just cold
and tired
of running up and down this court, we call life
Think of all the times
you said "I love you, my dearest"
it makes me insides ache
and my inner core turned up to Hundred & Four
I guess my heart can't take the goodness
that melts from the warmth of your gentle hands
and the edges of your pure bright heart
because I never experienced the reality
of an ideal relationship.
Author notes
This probably is not too good, it's pretty simple, but I would like to think that someone got something out of this.
I'm sorry if I am rusty, but I haven't written any love poetry in mintute and I'm in a depressively romantic mood. lol
Any advice would be lovely?
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simplicity is the most beautiful =]
and your emotion is clearly expressed, good write girl
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thank you so much
I just try to write a piece with everyday emotions, that anyone could relate with it.
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It's beautiful!
"It's not that I want to be alone
or that I'm lonely
I'm just cold
and tired
of running up and down this court, we call life"
Oh, I could CRY after reading this!!!!!
I so totally understand how that is. Awesome, you put it to words and in an amazing way.
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Thank you so much for your lovely comment!
I'm glad you like it, I haven't written anything about love lately. I thought I lost my spark, but now im in a lovey dovey mood again haha.
I'm just glad I've moved somebody
thanks again
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