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Goldilocks and the 3 bears

He’s sure somewhere someone
must have gotten the story wrong

The goldilocks he knows owns
no yellow curls

Instead cascading ramparts
fall beside her face

In long dark brown tresses
that would easily disgrace

Any little girl in little yellow
curls

As for porridge and  3 bears
he believes the facts to have
been

3 suitors competing for the honor
of having her out to supper

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