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can you hear me?

can you hear me
as I run from you

singing songs of insanity
just like yesterday
when you left me behind
with many unanswered questions?

didn't you realize
that it's not my fault
this time?

can you walk a mile
in my shoes
and finish
right at the beginning?

would you do it
or would you rather
leave me behind
and run away
to save yourself from the trouble?

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Don't ask. I have no idea what this means. BUT I'd love to hear your interpretations!

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  • Slick
    August 28, 2008

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    this is pretty good... i barely have a clue of what it means, but it's still good... lol... -slick99
  • reinhardt-napoleon
    August 5, 2008

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    sounds a lot like one i've written once... maybe i can explain it to you later, would take too long right now
    keep on writing coz i'm keeping on of course!
    jo


  • Melodies gold member
    August 4, 2008

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    Ah, of course. Your homework is calling out to you to get it finished. One book and then another speaks up. At the end the math book gives his 'lil speech because he is sure you will forget him. lol


    • LittleAnn
      August 4, 2008
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      I know I've been a naughty girl... Should have gone to bed long ago... But I'm not tired...