She stands before you in silent longing,
wanting to bath in nakedness with you.
Disrobes among the dancing flowers,
becomes coquettish, as lovers often do.
Let her feel you like a summer breeze,
blowing gently upon her bare shoulder,
Touch her and feel the warmth aglow,
give in to yearnng just to hold her.
Let her tease with bosom shown bare,
curves bring a twinkle to your eyes.
Arms stretched out she invites you in,
touch to breasts, brings forth sighs.
Look in her eyes, touch of her skin,
this beauty stands naked before you,
Arousing you to the point of release.
holding you close till you are through.
Love so tender, you never felt before.
wrapped in her arms you long to stay.
A vision of beauty in her nakedness,
this lover has stolen your heart away.
Author notes
Picture Prompt...
http://www.crystalinks.com/freya.jpg
In a list
A contest entry
- Goddess of Love by Heavenly Angel.
575 points, ended August 18, 2008, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Oh My~
Beauty of a piece penned and what images You have brought to Light- Love the words: silent longing
also reference to how she brings one to his knees- through touch
Excellent!!
Congratulations on Your Trophy win!
-Throws confetti-
Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo
Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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Great !
Great poem It flows very nicely is has
good content,and message it's good to seeing poetry with good thought with . Inspirational parts to help others Very well done. There were no errors. Or No typos. Nothing I Would change. I look forward to your next poem
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I like you Sandy, your naughty.. hehe
Verry good girl. Well writen.
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Glad you enjoyed my poem. Yes nsughty but nice.
Have a wonderful evening.
Bless You,
Sandy
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A truly beautiful piece of poetry!
A wonderful sharing in this contest; just makes me want to sigh..
Thank you for penning for this contest; I wish you the best of luck and thank you again!
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Outstanding
A goddess of love indeed! You described her beauty very well and brought her to life. I thought this was a sensual poem with some great imagery that was full of imagination. Best of luck in the contest
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Lovely Comment.
Thank you for stopping and reading. Take care. Sandy
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This is beautiful. Rich and sensual. The only thing I have any problem with is "holding you close till you are through. " it sounds rather blunt to me ... but I don't write erotica and rarely even try anything sensual because it comes off as comic
Again, beautiful.
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Excellent
Beautifuly written with great flow and expression. I especially liked your ending...Love so tender, you never felt before.
wrapped in her arms you long to stay.
A vision of beauty in her nakedness,
this lover has stolen your heart away.
Excellent.
Nevadapoet
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Wonderful Comment
I appreciate you dropping by and reading. Take care. Sandy
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Truly a beautiful painting, filled with vibrant colors of love, painted by your poetic voice! Thank you for bringing this to life. I'm sure you will do well in the contest!
She-ra
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God morning She-ra. Thank you for stopping by and reading. I appreciate your nice comment. Take care. Sandy
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Good morning to you too.
Have a blessed one,
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You have a wonderful day too.
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Well Sis, it has been such a long time since I passed by, but what a time to do so.
You have captured such beauty in the words and the imagery created. I feel quilty for missing the masterpieces I know you fulfill when your pen becomes the artists brush.
Absolutely brilliant
love always
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Hello Mike!!
Well it is so nice to have you pop in. Hope all is well across the Big Pond!! I appreciate your nice comment. You take care.
Always, Sister Sandy
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This is beautifully breathtakingly! I am in true awe at the beauty of this poem! It is one of the best I have ever read in regards to love and sensuality without being pornographic...it is gentle and yielding to the reader, and allows the perfect image of love to unfold before the imaginations eyes!
Meme
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Thank you for the nice comment. Take care, Sandy
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That was beautiful. It reads so well aloud. Well done and good luck in the contest
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Great Comment
Good morning slayer. Thank you for dropping by and reading. I appreciate the nice comment. You take care.
Sandy
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What a wonderful love poem. To share passion and desire with emotion spend without shame. Love is tender and beauties vision steals hearts away. The twinkle in outstretched arms longing touches bring hearts to caress wonders of life.
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GREAT COMMENT!!!!!!!!
Good morning Dan. Love your comment. So glad you enjoyed my poem. Your thoughts on my poetry mean alot to me. Thank you for reading. You take care dear friend. Hugs and Smiles filled with sunshine for you and yours.
Blessing to you too.
Sandy
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Awesome..as always a treat to come read your wonderful work... Always leave with AHHH!!! Feeling.
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Hugs and Smiles!!
Oh June, it is so nice to hear from you. I hope you have been enjoying the summmer. Your comment was lovely and so appreciated. Take care. Have missed you.
Bless You,
Sandy
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Romantic
A very romantic and heart felt poem. A Joy to Read.
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Very Nice Comment
Thank you for reading my poem. You take care. Sandy
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A vision of lovelyness
Something to behold where is her lover where can he be...mac
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My Dear Friend
Many thanks for your lovely comment. You always bringa smile day or night, whenever you pop in. Thank you for holding bacvk that mewan purple sunshine and bringing the warm yellow sun my way. Hope you are up and about soon. We have a shopping date ^grin^
Take care Mac
Bless You
Hugs and Smiles,
Sandy
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