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messy

lithe lean
little
black bugs
skittle across a snow-field
an array devoid of order
yet meandering
generally
headed south

fattened
summer birds do the same
leaving splatter trails
upon departure  

kept from migration
everything dies

let loose
a mess ensues

i never claimed i was a lover

or a writer.

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  • poet2angels gold member
    August 4, 2008

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    OMG

    So powerful this is...I love the ending and after all, to me, that is what makes the poem ...
    Such a sigh the ending envokes after the darkness that leads to it...I love this...!

    I love everything you write

    Lynda