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Origami

haiku in motion
snips of paper float through air
immobile trees fly

A contest entry

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  • Pome
    December 21, 2008
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    LOL haiku only has 17 syllables silly!


  • marlene47 silver member
    August 11, 2008

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    Thanks for your haiku entry... but I did want a few more words than this, at least 20.
    I like the play on words for mobile -> immobile.
    Interesting idea that immobile trees fly - is that as paper (once a tree)
    marlene