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[ you tell me that the moment has come ]

you tell me that the moment has come
to take revenge for all the days
you suffered from the truth

you never dared before, but today
a new era has begun

you declared the truth to be fake
so you could create
your own facts, your own rules, your own world
because you couldn't take the truth

have you thought of the consequences
of that crazy plan?

there's only you
no one else matters anymore
not even me

you try to make me do what you want
but you'll never succeed
because you'll never be stronger than me

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  • reinhardt-napoleon
    August 5, 2008

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    You should have added HOPE to the categories. Good poem, although it seems a bit like you are beating about the bush, you know?
    Good anyways. Keep up the word.
    Jo