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No Justice

My trusty razor blade
It gives me no justice
It provides me no freedom
But is does give me
A safe and secure feeling
It's like everything could be better
If only I could go a little deeper
Shed just a few more drops of blood
Then maybe
Just maybe
I can fix the pain
Make it escape from my body
Flash and gone in an instant
What do I have to offer this world now?

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  • BrokenDawn
    August 14, 2008

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    I can totally understand this feeling and this poem shows that wonderfully. Bravo and good luck!
    ~dawn♥


  • slippingofftheedge
    August 8, 2008
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    I understand the feeling