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Sexual Expressions

So much time lost
Never to be seen again
So much time I gave up
Wanting to be your friend

I'm sorry it happened this way
I put you in an awkward place
But I loved the feeling of seeing
The shocked look upon your face

It's okay for us to have sex
Friends with sexual expressions
It was your choice, you could have said no
Found another way to express your affections

But this is how our mistake played out
No reasons to feel bad now
Things have started to feel weird
I want to stop it but I'm not sure how

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  • XHollowXEyesX
    August 5, 2008
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    this is a very interesting and thought provoking piece of writing. I know that I can personally connect to this, something that I regret everyday. You told this story with a great simplicity but also with raw emotions.
    Beautiful write.
    All the best
    ~Hollow~


  • amandapoet15
    August 4, 2008

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    this is really good. it expresses many peoples relationships with their friends. i think many people can relate to it. its sad, but very good writing!