She is the warmest summer breeze
That warms the heart of every man
who glimpses her on winter days
and sees her shining through the trees
She is the touch of golden rays
That shimmers on the calmest lake
then gently reaches for the stars
And turns the morning sky opaque
A contest entry
- Delightful Art Inspired #2 by delightfulmess.
450 points, ended August 29, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I gentle little poem here; I never knew you had this sort of sentimental stuff lurking in you - it must be the influence of your lovely surroundings and the kind words of your friends.
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This is a great poem you have written.
The imagery and word play is exellent
I really like the ending line BRAVO!!!
Splendidly done indeed.
Best of wishes to you.
Tony
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thank you so much for your kind words, x
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very warming piece,,hope it does well x
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