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Swan Lake

Electric flashes beat energetically
over writhing bodies of sweat
pounding vibrations into the floor

Invisible smoke rises eloquently
alcohol, cologne and blood
this night's clawing perfume

Sitting in a crimson velvet corner
head slighted tilted toward black lace
fangs sank deep into ivory neck

I am enthralled by the haze
caressed by hypnotizing voices
drank in from desires

Surrounded by a primal need
high on erotic infiltration
sweetly surrendered to sanguine

The heart slows to near sleep
the furious dance lulls me
A gracefully floating swan

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  • LoneFairrie
    August 4, 2008

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    WOW! That just blew me away. It was almost heart breaking in its beauty. A vampire could only what so much from their victim.