Eyes staring at me like im a stone
Realizing that I will be left alone
Cause you can't see the real me
Behind the scattered dreams of beauty
I wish only to be loved by you
Only to be seen for what I can do
I wish only to feel your heart beat
Only to be the girl sitting in that seat
Thoughts lingered through my head
Thinking about all those things you said
Hoping you could feel my love
As I reach from up above
I wish only to be loved by you
Only to be seen for what I can do
I wish only to feel your heart beat
Only to be the girl sitting in that seat
You touch me and I become so weak
I dont want you to think im just a freak
I want you to do more then just touch me
I feel the passion, but thats all it will ever be
I wish only to be loved by you
Only to be seen for what I can do
I wish only to feel your heart beat
Only to be the girl sitting in that seat
Now I know my heart is true
Its too bad boy cause if you only knew
I would have given you everything
Now this is all I have left to sing
I wish only to be loved by you
Only to be seen for what I can do
I wish only to feel your heart beat
Only to be the girl sitting in that seat
But that girl will never be me
For I am not that girl you see
Author notes
Ok this is kinda like a song, but dunno if its good lol....i suck at the whole song this so yeah i tried something new let me know what you think. I really dont like it.
What did you think
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Good lyrics...a soft melody set to these words, and there you have it...A good love song...Keep up the good work!
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gr8 work gal.....its worth being sung by a gr8 singer.....i really liked it very much......the guy for whom u have written this is very lucky.......nice work.....
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Nice. This can work as a soft song ... sang slowly, maybe some piano tossed in there perhaps....
I really like it, and I know that you will improve from here on .. so great job doll and glad you wanted me to see this, makes me smile I'm actualy working on a piece right now with music ... for a very large contest .. i'll make sure I run it by you once i'm done .. before Aug. 31st Thanks for penning
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Thank u i find u to be a master at the song writing so i definetly value your opinion.
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Wow very good for a first try. I like it I could see it as being a song, but i have no idea what type of music it would be catagorized as. I guess I could see it being a sort of alanis morisette type singer and I think it would be good. I loved how you used your words here and the song itself was very relateable and very interesting. keep up the great work and i will keep on checking it out.
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I really liked this. I sorta feel this way about a girl right now. Great piece. Thanks for sharing and keep it up.
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