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The Spider in the Steering Wheel







At dawn I plucked her
out of the ruined web
There our predatory lives separated
I floated on the surface of raindrops
waiting for bugs























ddk

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  • tara wilson gold member
    August 18, 2008

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    lol...I love the simile of you in your car, to a spider in a web...quite an interesting observation, thanks for your entry

    No wait, edit this comment...LOL..

    I think perhaps there is more, like the leaving of a home already 'ruined' too... well done..


  • Thomas Scott gold member
    August 12, 2008
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    Such vivid imagery and an interesting perspective on solitude.
    Thanks for this.