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How Unfortunate?

Two animals, quite different in looks-
From them, a new relationship unfurls.
They'd make a lovely couple for a date…
It’s just a pity they both happen to be girls!



         

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Or it may not be a pity. It depends on how you look at it

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  • Roaddog Wolf
    August 17, 2008

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    different take on the prompt . And being as different looking as they are why should being both girls make their relation so odd? love comes in many forms but love is still love


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    August 11, 2008
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    This was a unique write. Has a sort of cute quality about it.


  • peridotPixi
    August 4, 2008

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    This is cute, i like your take on the prompt i like how you say that the girls would make a cute date, and the mention of how it in the ANs good luck in the i like the word unfurls you have used in this poem contest and keep up the wonderful writing, ~your sissy Amy


  • SeraphicKisses
    August 4, 2008
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    Haha. That was really cute. I like it. : )