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Faint



The shadow moves in across my eyes

His voice is dark and rhythmic

" Your hand shall I take

Your body I shall break "

Booming inside my head

These words beckon me

My heart beat echos his face

Life escapes from my chest

A long sigh of lament

Warm flesh and breath grow cold

As I fall to the floor

A shimmer of moonlight graces my skirt

Tendrils of dark hair fall across my pale face

The cool grasp of Death releases me

And leaves me, breathing in shallow

The knowledge of our dance

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  • Ace13
    August 7, 2008
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    what? looks like you should practice more lol good luck


  • peregrin
    August 4, 2008
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    I like it!
    Good work!
    Thanks for entering and good luck!