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To a gamble

In the serene arena
Lies the fair maiden's head
Eyes looking to a heaven
Only for she, is

Dead end, on end
Falling into place
The pistol fires
To begin this

Race away from the
Syrup sickly flowing
And from the deep abyss
It moves on never

Slowing to crescendo
Clamour, pacing,
Feat; the making of a
People when they

Meet in turmoil
A coil wraps
It warps a
Loci snaps...

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  • Leela
    December 7, 2008
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    i liked this write very much. it is calm but the context is anything but, i like that.


  • RockBandPromoter
    August 5, 2008
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    although unfinished

    this is a brilliant write.

    I like it.

    Your bestfriend,
    Emily.