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Not a Chameleon

Missing image
very visible
pink flower, small white spider
no camouflage here

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  • Choclate Pudding 3
    August 27, 2008
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    Its visible that you Rock't it!

    Good job, the picture makes it complete...


  • Swan song gold member
    August 16, 2008
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    This is true Very good little haiku thank you for entering

  • Michael P gold member
    August 14, 2008

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    I loved this-yes nature doesnt have to hide its beuaty-it is there everywhere if one just looks-an excellent Q granny-peace


  • Amera gold member
    August 5, 2008

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    This is beautiful! This poem does everything a haiku should do. It's about nature and it paints a picture. You did amazing things with seventeen syllables. Well Done!

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • Haiku-bless-you silver member
    August 4, 2008

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    Good observational haiku. Good contrast, a beautiful flower and an ugly spider, both living but oh so different. Good work!

    Dennis

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