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Dots

dots float
red, on green stems
beside watery lush,
inhaling, peacefulness of calm
slowly

In a list

A contest entry

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  • leo2
    August 6, 2008

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    It's been a while since I've read any cinquains and this is a worthy effort. I wish you all the best in the contest.

    Sincerely,
    Leo Long

  • carole21
    August 5, 2008
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    nice descriptive write . . thanks for the contest entry . .


  • Sandygram silver member
    August 5, 2008

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    Lovely Poem

    Good morning my friend. You have penned a lovely poem. You say so much with your five lines. The imagery is beautiful and captures the picture so nicely. Best of luck in the contest. Take care.

    Blessings,
    Sandy