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Earth Angel

Look at this picture
It’s such a delight
Our baby angel is
Preparing to take flight

Only a short time
After this was taken
Her wings became real
There is no mistaking

An angel on earth
We said she’d be
But now in Heaven
Her spirit flies free

We turn to God
Praying for peace
As from our grief
We beg for release

My little earth angel
In this life, it’s true
Now is the prettiest
That Heaven ever knew


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Chloe Lane Utter back
My grandchild
2a/22/08 to 3/28/08
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  • xCandieKissesx
    August 14, 2008

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    Beautiful.

    What a touching, yet sorrowful piece. I'm so sorry about your granddaughter!

    Look at this picture
    It’s such a delight
    Our baby angel is
    Preparing to take flight

    Only a short time
    After this was taken
    Her wings became real
    There is no mistaking

    Wow! I fell in love with these stanza's! Wonderful job and thanks for entering!!


  • penman gold member
    August 8, 2008
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    Beautiful

    Another truly touching creation. So full of love Best of luck in the contest.


  • Meroza
    August 7, 2008

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    So sad, yet so strong! She really was a beautiful girl, it hurts to know that she left so early.
    Stay strong, and never forget!

    Best of luck in the contest!


  • Lamia
    August 5, 2008

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    This was such a beautiful poem. What a lovely little child. A friend of ours had to go through a tragedy much like this once. It's just such a terrible grief. Thoughts and prayers with you.
    Thank you for the lovely comment on my poem by the way


  • Venus25
    August 4, 2008
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    Speechless

    What a beautiful poem for a beautiful little angel!

    So sorry for your loss

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