My soul
is lifted
from darkness
by God's wings of light.
Grace's glows
in tangerine awakening,
drinking its forgiveness,
baptized
as redemption's dove,
freed to fly
His love's
cerulean sky.
Author notes
30 words
A contest entry
- Quickie for a Quickie PIF #107 12 Poets /30 words by Roaddog Wolf.
425 points, ended August 5, 2008, 12 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - CONTEST : "WINGS OF COMPASSION IN TIMES OF GRIEF" by maa by maa.
2221 points, ended August 26, 2008, 41 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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thank you so much for having responded to my invitation and for offering this graceful and sensitive verse in order to bring comfort to a grieving soul ... I truly believe in collective prayer and the power of heartfelt words to uplift another person who dwells in the well of desolation ...
tomorrow, we will go visit our cousin and offer him your words printed out together with those of our other ap-angels ...
thank you so much for your help,
maa
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Seems like every poem I read of yours is already a gold trophy winner, or would warrant a gold trophy had it been in a contest. Another beautiful piece. You are certainly a master at this and I appreciate you sharing your poetry with us.
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well no doubt it is hard to deny your talent for any length or duration because you just write everything so well. most of us write many to write one good poem, you write many good poems to maybe write one not soand that is seldom , good write
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A truly beautiful, beautiful write!
This is possibly one of my very favorites of yours, hon!
Wishing you the best of luck in this contest as it deserves the very best!
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I drank this and it went down deliciously!
Sol
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